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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2018-02-16 12:02 PM



I confess I was smitten by a girl in my class
I loved her long flowing hair...every strand
My heart was played by love’s relentless, crushing pass

It was a time when love was fresh and new to me
Turning every single waking thought...to her,
and liberating inside me, what it was to be

I always thought you were the prettiest girl
and my infatuation for you has never diminished
My love turned true and I no longer feel hurt

In Dallas, on my cheek our first kiss you laid,
the lightness of your lips ever-lingering in me...like a breath
I feel it still, knowing its warmth will never fade

An ember in my heart was set ablaze
that through many years was held from public view
You know you still make me spin with cupid’s craze

Now, I sow and mow easing every creeping sun,
unwinding and replacing fate’s thin threads,
to spin a skein where we can at last, be as one

That I’ve hurt some once near and dear would be true,
but their tangled woven webs needed to be unwound,
and ‘til time stops, my darling, know this…
I do love you...and I always will, NMW


...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2018-02-16 09:02 AM


Bluesy,
You are a bottomless pit of I love you's for your Linny. They are never the same and they never get old. That makes you a Mr. Wonderful.

~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
2 posted 2018-02-21 08:19 PM


She's my baby, Miss Lori...

...just bein' Bluesy

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