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I Was Too Tired To Cook So I Popped Open A Can Of Sardines: I Think Too Much...

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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A frantic fish swam along the shoal
seeking one small fish-sized hole

Fragile, agile, fleet of fin
on the outside looking in

Dash, splash, flap-flap
squeezed into a tiny gap

Still so flustered, calming down
in a tin can shelved in town...


...just bein' Bluesy
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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What fun Bluesy! Loved your rhymes. Way to think out of the box...er...the tin. ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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I eat a lot of them. Miss Lori, but this is the first time I stopped between bites to consider their plight.

I like carrots too, but sometimes, when it's quiet, I can hear them screaming...
Damn "carrot-tops" are all alike!

...just bein' Bluesy

 
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