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Poet In Pink
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I find myself drawn to our cozy love nook
Nestled so quaintly beside the quiet brook
As the sweet scent of flowers permeate the air
I recall the time you placed one in my hair

I watch the water lilies dancing about
Amongst the tiny bubbles from friendly trout
I think of how we used to dangle bare feet
Cooling our heels and more from the searing heat

A soft breeze blows gently caressing my skin
As a melancholy ache stirs from within
Long gone memories that deeply hurt so good
Of a perfect love lost yet not understood

I gaze into the water and look for me
But just a mere illusion is all I see
A somber blank expression now dons this face
Riddled with thoughts of another time and place

I find myself drawn to our cozy love nook
Nestled so quaintly beside the quiet brook
The sad sound of silence now permeates the air
As I sit with my memories in despair

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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1 posted 02-08-2018 03:03 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Such warm reminisces, Miss Pinky, that took me far beyond the sadness...as in these lighthearted lines:
quote:
"I watch the water lilies dancing about
Amongst the tiny bubbles from friendly trout"
...Sweet.  

Lookie here, o' divine one, you need to stop listening to that sad piano stuff...k? Here then, Miss Pinky, toss this around some and see if it makes you a tasty salad. It's on me, so you won't need your purse. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XcuYoZug5iM




...just bein' Bluesy
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 02-08-2018 07:59 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Pictureofpink,

Love the pics! Dang girl, you and your never mending broken heart poems. You're sad to the bone. ~L
ethome
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3 posted 02-13-2018 08:17 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Beautifully expressed.
Love that line "hurts so good" because it says so much.
Well done, enjoyable romantic read.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

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Thankies Bluesy for the read and video ~ Always so nice to hear from you
Poet In Pink
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Hi ya Lori Lou Thankies for stopping in for a read ~ I agree sometimes my poetry does take a sad turn...but that is the true depiction of life sometimes Always appreciate you!
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Hello Eric Thank you for the read and your kind words ~ Alana
 
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