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There Ain't A Piece Of Ice In This World I Ain't Slipped On...!

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror


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'To err is human'
As bitter as a March wind
was her sullen face
>>>----->       

I'll try and get it right the second time around!  

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 02-03-2018 05:14 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

So what is wrong with this? If it was my senyru you wouldn't judge it so harshly. Give yourself a break Bluesy. ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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2 posted 02-03-2018 11:22 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

"This", my dear Miss Lori, was not the intended poem. I made a mistake and covered it up with a senyru. I don't do that "Moderator, please delete this" stuff...I just fill the void with even more tripe! Of course, I borrowed the first line from Alexander Pope's famous essay, with respects to indicate my grave mistake.

But I'm glad you liked my 'band-aid' anyway.

Many thanks!

...just bein' Bluesy

Poet In Pink
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To err is human
But to learn from one's mistakes
Lends wisdom to life
Enjoyed your boo boo
Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 02-05-2018 04:18 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Thanks, Miss Pinky... I'll try, try, again!    


                      

...just bein' Bluesy

 
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