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A Tale From The Bottom Of An Urban Bourbon: The Sin Of Loving Rita Lynn...

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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0 posted 02-02-2018 01:11 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

I can only implore you to let me go, Rita Lynn
I just donít know the lines to this crazy song you sing

Even with a fat wallet, either worked for or stolen
I could never pay for you, Rita Lynn, never in a lifetime

Here comes the bus, baby
{damn it! I donít care about the money...}

You know, one bus can take you uptown
{I need you Ö }

One bus can take you downtown.
{but I don't want you}

One bus can take you crosstown,
{no, I don't need you, Rita Lynn...}

One bus can take you anywhere you want to go
{oh, please don't go, baby, I know I love you...}


...just bein' Bluesy
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Poet In Pink
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1 posted 02-03-2018 06:09 PM       View Profile for Poet In Pink   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet In Pink

Wanting...Needing...Loving...It can be a crazy roller coaster ride and a thin line to boot.  Enjoyed Bluesy
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 02-04-2018 04:18 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Sorry Bluesy,
Thought I commented on this Friday, but I only read it early in the morning and was contemplating a response I was going to do at work. I got busy and spaced it out.

You have yet to write a piece I didn't like.
This is no exception. Struggling to say why and what I like about it specifically. I just do. ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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3 posted 02-15-2018 12:23 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Thank you, Miss Pinky. I always appreciate your comments.

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 02-15-2018 12:25 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

That's quite alright, Miss Lori. It took me awhile to see that I hadn't thanked you, which of course, I do!

...just bein' Bluesy

 
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