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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror

0 posted 2018-01-30 01:21 AM



Tomorrow is a good day to die...tomorrow, not today
When I can, I pay... when I can’t, I steal
You once asked me how I feel about crime? It’s no bother...really
Even an old gun does wonders...you don’t need to shoot anyone,
...not very often anyway

Just show ‘em the gun...saves money on cartridges
As long as I’m earning cash, I don’t really give a rat’s ass
about life, love or learning...whether river deep or mountain high
So, do you live or do you die... it’s your call, my friend...no, actually, it’s mine
So...what’ll it be, a glass of blood or a glass of wine?

...Looks the same to me

...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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1 posted 2018-01-30 05:37 AM


Bluesy,
my, my, this is a trip to harsh reality land.
interesting perspective, "bad guy" doesn't seem so much 'bad' as rational. Makes a person take a second thought about "bad guys" ~L

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2018-01-30 09:33 AM


I lived with that attitude for about ten years when I was walking the mean streets of this great country, so you can honestly say I relate.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
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3 posted 2018-01-30 12:08 PM


Thanks for reading, Miss Lori, and for this:
quote:
"Makes a person take a second thought about "bad guys"
...it's nice to be around to have 'second thoughts', or as many as I wish!

You're a doll...not a 'moll'!

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 2018-01-30 12:10 PM


"so you can honestly say I relate".

No, bad guy...only you can say that.


...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
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5 posted 2018-01-30 12:39 PM


Nope I am NOT A "bad guy," I just had their attitude.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Poet In Pink
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Posts 1066
MI
6 posted 2018-01-31 02:32 PM


Go ahead punk make my day! ha ha  I for one hope I never have to see the day come when I would have to make the choice. I'm a wee bit of a whippersnapper...So think we'd have a showdown   A thought provoking read Bluesy
Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
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7 posted 2018-01-31 04:11 PM


quote:
"Go ahead punk make my day!"
Oh, my! You girls are just full of chuckles today! Because of you and your 'Lori Belle', Miss Pinky, I have to spend my 'quality time' sittin' here laughin' like a Hyena on a feather bed!  
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...just bein' Bluesy

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