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Poet In Pink
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I come here often when I am blue
When I'm overcome with missing you
The waves wash up and whisper your name
But with you gone the sounds not the same

I trace little hearts upon the sand
Yearning for the touch of your warm hand
I am so lonely with this ache inside
Can't fill this void though I have tried

In our spot I can feel you near
My whispered words I believe you hear
I sit and watch the orange suns soft glow
As it sets there is one thing I know

You were my first and my only love
Now you look down from the stars above
So I wish I may ~ I wish I might
Know the love that I wish for tonight

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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That there was but one love, Miss Pinky, I can fully understand. The heartaches of loss and the joy of the love that once was spent together are what I read in these lovely words:
quote:
"I come here often when I am blue
When I'm overcome with missing you
The waves wash up and whisper your name
But with you gone the sounds not the same"
Truly a heartfelt poem. Time will out.   

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
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The words you have strung together, Alana, are beautiful to the nth. How can one read these thoughts converted into words without feeling warm inside even with a ache there beside it is impossible for me to fathom..

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 01-29-2018 06:45 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Pinkydeepblue,
You play the heartstrings like a violin with the sweetest sad tune. You have a gift. ~L
jwesley
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4 posted 01-29-2018 10:04 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Have to agree with all the above, my friend. After all, they stole my thunder.

j.
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Thank you Bluesy for your understanding and kind words ~ Always look forward to your take on thangs
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Thank you Jerry for your kind comment ~ It's so nice to hear when your poetry touches the reader Alana
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Thankies Lori Belle for your sweet comments You always warm my heart with your praise ~ Pinkydeepblue
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Thanks muchers for dropping in for a read Jimmy ~ Nice to see you around Alana
 
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