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soul drifter
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0 posted 01-25-2018 02:54 PM       View Profile for soul drifter   Email soul drifter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for soul drifter

She

She will let you in
but only if you knock
she holds the key
so if her doors unlock
you gotta respect her
actions speak louder than words
it's a level playing field
and if you want to know how she feels
well she's more than you think
she's not there just to shrink
to fit neatly within your hand
you've got to understand
the will
the heart
the bones
she's real, she's smart, she will let it show
shower her love down on you
only if you're true
her boundaries are clear and don't push if she says no
there's so much more you could do together if you're patient for love to grow
her garden gate will only open one way
and you've got to listen to what she has to say
but just keep the faith, keep the flame
men and women we're all different but our wishes and desires are the same
love is living life at the fullest it's not a game
but just keep cool, keep this all in mind as your love like a blossom grows
hey, it's just a block up the street, take a left and then man you're good to go
she is waiting
she is waiting
in these dark times for a little true love to show

"Beauty has a way of seeming unconcerned" - Neil Finn, 'Terrorize Me'

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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1 posted 01-26-2018 12:15 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Rings of fatherly advice or perhaps, motherly...to a point.

...just bein' Bluesy

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2 posted 01-26-2018 01:10 AM       View Profile for soul drifter   Email soul drifter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for soul drifter

I hadn't had that in mind but I suppose it could be. More along the lines of from one man to another is what I had sorta had in mind.

Thank you.
Bluesy Socrateaser
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3 posted 01-26-2018 05:35 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

With that in mind, Zach, and as an afterthought, I should have put it; "...up to a point", thus leaving room for further interpretation.
  

...just bein' Bluesy

ethome
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Some good advice in a fine poetic way.
I enjoyed the trip down the page.
Good stuff!

true love never looks after it's own interests

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"She" is all that and more Wonderfully expressed soul drifter ~ Much enjoyed the read...Wished more men felt like you do ~ Alana
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