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Blue Eyes Dreaming

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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London


0 posted 01-24-2018 11:26 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy


~~~
Not far it was from Heaven
'twas the very month of June
and the sweetest birds were singing
when first
she stole my tune ...

As if from out the bluest sky
an angel came to call

Quintessence of Irish memory
with braids as I recall

The golden sun's shine o'er the dew
reflected
through her eyes

Like flowers
from a woodland path
her smile just mesmerized

With dancer's wings she stepped along
my song held in her arms

My blue eyes dreaming
hypnotized
now locked within her charms

"Good day kind sir"
sweet melody
embraced my very soul

With butterflies and rubber thighs
my tongue
I swear it swoll

My heart stood tall
to brace my jaw
an lock the molars tight

The best I managed
was a smile
my voice had taken flight

Pausing
she locked her gaze to mine
reached out to my lapel

Placed a fragrant flower there
bent close
to share its smell

The moment
stole my breath from me

I gazed in pure delight

Enchanted with her beauty rare
awoke
to silent night
~~~
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ethome
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since 05-14-2000
Posts 11887
New Brunswick Canada


1 posted 01-25-2018 10:21 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Hey Rex you sure had me going.
Don't ya hate waking up from a dream like that!!
I really enjoyed this.

true love never looks after it's own interests

Poet In Pink
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since 05-18-2017
Posts 814
MI


2 posted 01-28-2018 03:12 PM       View Profile for Poet In Pink   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet In Pink

Sounds to me like blue eyes were dreaming a sweet dream ~ The best kind Much enjoyed Rex ~ Nice to see you posting here ~ Alana
Marchmadness
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since 09-16-2007
Posts 8890
So. El Monte, California


3 posted 02-03-2018 12:27 AM       View Profile for Marchmadness   Email Marchmadness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marchmadness

Always enjoy your poetry, Rex.
Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London


4 posted 02-03-2018 08:15 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

Eric... if i have this dream any more often, i may not wake

Alana... thank you,  it surely is the best dream

Ida... Thank you so much. I enjoy reading you too
jwesley
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since 04-30-2000
Posts 7274
Spring, Texas


5 posted 02-20-2018 08:24 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Like your dreams better than mine, my friend . . . always good to see your writing. Always enjoy.

just like this time,

j.
Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 11-07-2002
Posts 1502
In The Mirror


6 posted 02-21-2018 12:09 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

quote:
"The best I managed
was a smile
my voice had taken flight
How virginally innocent of a line.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 10-10-2009
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Fair to middlin'


7 posted 02-21-2018 05:22 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Rex,
This poem is like the promise of springtime!
What a lovely dream! I enjoyed this very much.
~L
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