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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
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In The Mirror

0 posted 2018-01-23 12:06 PM


Now, my baby is a window washin’ woman
she never leaves a streak when she’s all done
Carrying her bucket and a squeegee
she makes the hardest task look like fun!

I watch her from a tree limb in the distance
as the time she takes to wash ‘em does swiftly pass
Then suddenly I fell onto the pavement
Blinded by the sun-reflected glass!

There’s a moral to my story if you listened
that my Linny turns windows into mirrors
So if you find yourself out on a tree limb…
you’d be wise to tie a pillow to your rear!


...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2018-01-23 02:32 AM


you sound in a good Bluesy mood in this one!
You are a special kind of silly and I like that. ~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
2 posted 2018-01-23 03:30 AM


Ha-ha! Hey, Miss Lori! Don't you sleep anymore? Thanks for spending some time with me in these late night/early morning hours.

My baby has had lot's of jobs when she wasn't going to school. A couple I wrote about in the same style was about her making flags
and driving a fork truck. So, I got a letter from her telling me how she was washing windows and I just had to write something about it.

Thanks a lot for giving it a read...  
Now drink your warm milk and go back to bed!  
  


...just bein' Bluesy

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