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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2018-01-22 01:11 AM




Lover, after our last, fantastically, orgasmic dance,
came the feeling that I had been with you here before

Be that as it may, baby, I still don’t know what it is you want me for,
but whatever it is, I will do it anyway

In the city, we knew the odor of drains and the clatter of trains,
the traffic on old bridges and the chattering in corner coffee shops

You once told me it all made you feel so giddy, so ethereal...inane
Lover? Do you think that we will meet again?

I loved to kiss you through the thick of your lipstick, and sometimes...even chewing gum
Funny though, I seldom saw you parted from your availability

I found myself trying to analyze you, and at times I despised you,
but at all times I adored you

Be that as it may, baby, I still don’t know what it is you want me for,
I only know that I want you more than my life...



...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2018-01-22 04:31 AM


You don't know what she wants you for? Your fame and fortune of course. Silly man. As if your burning passion for her weren't enough,your honey coated words of devotion are a pretty good start on the list of her wants from you. The fact you make her laugh figures in there somewhere too. Lets not forget that you understand her and that leaves so much she doesn't have to try to explain...
Seems to me she needs you for her someone to love. ~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
2 posted 2018-01-22 04:42 AM


There's more fiction than fact here, Miss Lori...but there's definitely facts.
Still, I like the way you have it worked out.

Thanks for the 'in-depth' reply! Not many of those going around!   

...just bein' Bluesy

Poet In Pink
Senior Member
Posts 1066
MI
3 posted 2018-01-24 10:58 PM


Your scenario is so true to life...Sometimes I think it can just be a need to be met at the time...Not necessarily a desire for long lasting commitment. Sometimes Ya just go in with no expectations and roll with the flow ~ That by the way is almost impossible when your a die hard romantic  
Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
4 posted 2018-01-26 05:27 AM


quote:
"That, by the way, is almost impossible when your a die-hard romantic"
...quite right, Miss Pinky. Thanks for adding that on.   

...just bein' Bluesy

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