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Following The Night: In Search Of A Suitable Sunrise...

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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0 posted 01-19-2018 03:28 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

I saw her once, appearing crushed and withered, yet so beautiful, lovely as crumpled satin
She was lying curled...sleeping, wrapped in the fabric of her gently fraying dreams

Her heart may have been burning in embers of spent passion, speaking what I feel from the warmth of her body
Hair like that of dampened pampas grass, softly colored and wistfully blown in the early morning air

As morning’s light is slowly delivered, she stirs awake to feel my presence, as I hold her now in my safekeeping
Then, I saw a teardrop gently fall upon her cheek, washing away a stain so carelessly left by a jealous quarter moon

...one should never sleep alone

...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 01-19-2018 07:42 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Bluesy,
One word for this one: Brilliant! ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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Miss Lori,

One word for you...'Sweet'

...just bein' Bluesy

Poet In Pink
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A touching and delicate write Bluesy ~ This really spoke to me ~ Enjoyed so much
Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 01-21-2018 04:41 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

You're a good woman, Miss Pinky. I appreciate your comments...always.

...just bein' Bluesy

 
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