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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
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In The Mirror

0 posted 2018-01-14 06:33 PM


I love a woman with a soothing gaze that looks forever, however distantly
If I could swim in the same water or breathe the air which instinctively clings to her beauty
...I would be happy

I love this woman with dark eyes, black lashes, wearing wistful colors, smoky blues, and a starched white collar
She possesses a half heavenly body with a half curved shape that is revealed in my somewhat lacking imagination
...in the vertical plane

I love this woman who walks with a swing in her pleats, transfixing time like a metronome in a preternatural melody
I love this woman for the surface of things yet unsought, so shyly I glance away from her collections of me
...she loves me, she loves me not

...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2018-01-15 04:24 AM


Bluesy,
sometimes I have to stop and think awhile before I know what to say. Not that I have to figure out the poem, it is more like I have to sort out my response. I'm always struck by your unique approach to your topic.
Love is always in there somewhere. And they are just plain cool. ~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror
2 posted 2018-01-17 08:32 PM


I'm always pleased to please you, Miss Lori. These last days of hers have started me thinking in different ways...patterns, if you will. Some of the more 'abstract stuff just floats to and fro until it hits the floor.

Many thanks again, my dear.

...just bein' Bluesy

Poet In Pink
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3 posted 2018-01-20 07:01 PM


Like the way you've penned your emotions in this one Bluesy ~ I'm pretty sure the answer would be...Loves you ~ Enjoyed as always
Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 2018-01-21 04:57 AM


Thanks, Miss Pinky! I believe you're right!

...just bein' Bluesy

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