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A Game Of Serendipitous Snooker: You Were Always The Best Shot...

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror


0 posted 01-12-2018 08:59 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Framed in a picture, we were...framed and hung on our own wall of shame
But now, the images have faded some and will continue to do so, just as memories do

And as the curves of daylight fall upon us, itís my own features that accept the blame
For when my eyes rest on yours, my darling, you glow right through me, as you once did in innocence

Your feelings were loaded into that gun, and one by one you raised it to meet our needs
But baby, when you stood too close and you shut your eyes, you knew it was far easier to bank your shot


...just bein' Bluesy
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Good morning from the land of yawns!

Your word play here is great and the underlying emotions intense. Love your stuff, man. ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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2 posted 01-19-2018 04:47 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

I'm happy to know that you "like my stuff", Miss Lori. Would you slap me if I said I liked your stuff, too?

...just bein' Bluesy

 
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