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A Game Of Serendipitous Snooker: You Were Always The Best Shot...
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A Game Of Serendipitous Snooker: You Were Always The Best Shot... |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror 
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Framed in a picture, we were...framed and hung on our own wall of shame But now, the images have faded some and will continue to do so, just as memories do And as the curves of daylight fall upon us, it’s my own features that accept the blame For when my eyes rest on yours, my darling, you glow right through me, as you once did in innocence Your feelings were loaded into that gun, and one by one you raised it to meet our needs But baby, when you stood too close and you shut your eyes, you knew it was far easier to bank your shot ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Good morning from the land of yawns! Your word play here is great and the underlying emotions intense. Love your stuff, man. ~L |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
I'm happy to know that you "like my stuff", Miss Lori. Would you slap me if I said I liked your stuff, too?  ...just bein' Bluesy |
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