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Almost Wholehearted
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Posts 20
Pgh, PA

0 posted 2018-01-11 08:14 PM



I need to wash my hair
I have too many troubles
Too many worries
Clouding up my mind
Scattering all my thoughts

They cling to my dreams
Like snaking vines
And creeping ivy
Giving me no respite
And no peace

So I need to wash my hair
And get my head space clean

I think our capacity for wholeheartedness can never be greater than our willingness to be broken-hearted."  Brene Brown

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
1 posted 2018-01-12 01:38 AM


quote:
"So I need to wash my hair
And get my head space clean"
Ha-ha-ha! I like this, *Al. How can I not? I absolutely do the same thing! Could be that I've got longer hair than you, but you may have more "troubles" and "worries" than I do. But...I may have had more of those at another time. Anywhoo...

*I was going to call you "A" or "AW"...but something tells me you're more of an "Al" kinda gal!

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2018-01-12 05:20 AM


Hey Al, (any friend of Bluesy's is a friend of mine)
I like this little ditty here. I can so relate. I need to go wash my hair and wash out the things I'm 'not' worrying about. lol.

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2018-01-12 07:23 AM


LOL, very adorable write/right!

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2018-01-21 07:00 AM


This seems to be more of a women's type of feeling but you put it across well.
Not like some of the guys out there that used to be head and shoulders guys but are now more like mop and glow.......he he..
I enjoyed this...

true love never looks after it's own interests

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
5 posted 2018-02-20 08:26 PM


Gosh, so hear it about "head space clean".  Really enjoyed, my friend...


j.

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London
6 posted 2018-02-20 09:43 PM


I heard once, you can rinse out the soap with beer. Well, the beer didn't exactly remove the taste as well as I'd hoped.
Almost Wholehearted
Junior Member
Posts 20
Pgh, PA
7 posted 2018-02-20 11:29 PM


Thank you everyone!

I think our capacity for wholeheartedness can never be greater than our willingness to be broken-hearted."  Brene Brown

Almost Wholehearted
Junior Member
Posts 20
Pgh, PA
8 posted 2018-02-20 11:29 PM


Thank you everyone!

I think our capacity for wholeheartedness can never be greater than our willingness to be broken-hearted."  Brene Brown

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