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Almost Wholehearted
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0 posted 01-11-2018 08:14 PM       View Profile for Almost Wholehearted   Email Almost Wholehearted   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Almost Wholehearted


I need to wash my hair
I have too many troubles
Too many worries
Clouding up my mind
Scattering all my thoughts

They cling to my dreams
Like snaking vines
And creeping ivy
Giving me no respite
And no peace

So I need to wash my hair
And get my head space clean

I think our capacity for wholeheartedness can never be greater than our willingness to be broken-hearted."  Brene Brown

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror


1 posted 01-12-2018 01:38 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

quote:
"So I need to wash my hair
And get my head space clean"
Ha-ha-ha! I like this, *Al. How can I not? I absolutely do the same thing! Could be that I've got longer hair than you, but you may have more "troubles" and "worries" than I do. But...I may have had more of those at another time. Anywhoo...

*I was going to call you "A" or "AW"...but something tells me you're more of an "Al" kinda gal!

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 01-12-2018 05:20 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Hey Al, (any friend of Bluesy's is a friend of mine)
I like this little ditty here. I can so relate. I need to go wash my hair and wash out the things I'm 'not' worrying about. lol.
LeeJ
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3 posted 01-12-2018 07:23 AM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

LOL, very adorable write/right!
ethome
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since 05-14-2000
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New Brunswick Canada


4 posted 01-21-2018 07:00 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

This seems to be more of a women's type of feeling but you put it across well.
Not like some of the guys out there that used to be head and shoulders guys but are now more like mop and glow.......he he..
I enjoyed this...

true love never looks after it's own interests

jwesley
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since 04-30-2000
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5 posted 02-20-2018 08:26 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Gosh, so hear it about "head space clean".  Really enjoyed, my friend...


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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London


6 posted 02-20-2018 09:43 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

I heard once, you can rinse out the soap with beer. Well, the beer didn't exactly remove the taste as well as I'd hoped.
Almost Wholehearted
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7 posted 02-20-2018 11:29 PM       View Profile for Almost Wholehearted   Email Almost Wholehearted   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Almost Wholehearted

Thank you everyone!

I think our capacity for wholeheartedness can never be greater than our willingness to be broken-hearted."  Brene Brown

Almost Wholehearted
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Thank you everyone!

I think our capacity for wholeheartedness can never be greater than our willingness to be broken-hearted."  Brene Brown

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