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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Oh, this version created was somehow shaped within the stomach of thought tapping into some innate magnificence, that is phenomenal… always knowing, always hearing, but not always cultivating the body holds this intelligence deep within some semblance of memories The familiar beheld, thru my mother’s blood, sweat and tears which puts the white-collar worker to shame…. digging a hole and planting desire, for some sense of autonomy but the growth is cluttered with muscle of rubies and gold ego cultivates a land where we grow, but perspectives nose-dive into some endless ocean, where one tends to lose their sincerest soul Falling, down, down, down… drowning into some philosophical vacation, full of waves of great powers and yet, right into a space where we’re supposed to be designed specifically to a tune only for my eyes and ears for the presence of our basic training…insightful and sincere I remembered where I didn’t want to be….and all those darkest hours swelling consuming honey from that swim, traveling through a certainty expedition monochrome shadows were reaching out for me while I roamed knowing life can only be understood by the darkness and it’s self-assurance and from all it’s buoyancy can I see the most beautiful things I held these reflections close |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
quote:...and therein lay your efforts. People assume understanding in their own unique ways, which they are privileged to do from their own center. It's said that truth is simple...if it were complicated everyone would understand it. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nice indeed, love the title! "always knowing, always hearing, but not always cultivating" Hah, that's where I've always had the trouble, incurable dreamer and you've laid that out very well in this....... Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I loved this journey you took me on. Each line a gem! ~L |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
So much to not only think about, but to feel within your words LeeJ ~ Much enjoyed & Thank you for sharing  Alana |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
You haven't lost your touch, LeeJ. It's pretty much where I am at the moment but you said it so very, very, much better than I ever could. Greatly enjoyed! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I have to be honest. This is about seven universes beyond me with this one. If you look I'm that slimy thing still wiggling at the bottom of the primordial soup. I enjoyed it. I always do, your musings . . . just don't ask me to write a paper on it: I'd use a whole ream! ... Funning a lot here, my friend . . . sometimes you're just way to deep for my addled mind. as always . . . jimmy |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hello all...thank you for stopping by and taking a looksie. Jimmy, I'm speaking of the time before I was born, while I was in my mother's womb. Then being born, and DNA Memory or cell memory. And how we are all so specifically designed and different and how utterly miraculous it all is...this inner intellect that we all possess, and how we grow from all things, mentally, even the bad. We are born so pure, so Godly...and than experience takes over....but still miraculous, and molded by the darkness, (bad experiences)) it is who we are...life assures us, we are, we were and will be forever more. Hope this helps. |
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