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Poet In Pink
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0 posted 12-30-2017 11:14 PM       View Profile for Poet In Pink   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Poet In Pink






Oh my sweet lover
Have no fear
Though you can't see me
I'm right here

I'm the moonbeams
Dancin' cross your floor
The waves that embrace you
At the shore

I'm the twinkle
Of the stars above
Simply close your eyes
And sense my love

I'm the delicate rose
In full bloom
I'm the scent of your
Favorite perfume

You'll find me in
A warm balmy breeze
As it softly whispers
Through your trees

I'm the sunshine
That kisses your skin
When you need me
Just look from within

So when you ask
"Where are you tonight?"
Know I'm always there
Though out of sight

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror


1 posted 12-31-2017 02:07 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Such beauty, romance, and sensuousness embracing each stanza, Miss Pinky. I wanted to warm myself with each one, but my confession is that I find myself an easy mark with this...
quote:
"I'm the delicate rose
In full bloom
I'm the scent of your
Favorite perfume"
You're a dangerous woman, Miss Pinky. It's best you stay home tonight.  

"Forget me not?"..."Forget you never!"  


...just bein' Bluesy
ethome
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since 05-14-2000
Posts 11852
New Brunswick Canada


2 posted 12-31-2017 05:51 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Beautiful romantic flow, captured me from beginning to end. Each verse made me look forward to the next one.
If I was the subject I think I'd want you around.

true love never looks after it's own interests

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 10-10-2009
Posts 8614
Fair to middlin'


3 posted 12-31-2017 10:57 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Pinkymelt,
Obviously you have hit a tender spot with the fellas with this one. It is no wonder, it is a beautiful piece. Way to go girlie! ~L
JerryPat2
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Posts 16426
South Louisiana


4 posted 12-31-2017 12:22 PM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

Oh my, you do have a way with words to soothe the savage beast. Never noticed it before, but the initials in your name are the same as the ones in Passions in Poetry. Gotta love it!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

BluesSerenade
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since 10-23-2001
Posts 10643
By the Seaside


5 posted 01-01-2018 09:39 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

Very beautiful..the love you write of is tangible.
Poet In Pink
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6 posted 01-04-2018 02:39 PM       View Profile for Poet In Pink   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet In Pink

Thank you so much for your more than kind words Bluesy You always say the nicest things & I do appreciate you   
Poet In Pink
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7 posted 01-04-2018 02:41 PM       View Profile for Poet In Pink   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet In Pink

Pleased to meet you Ethome Thank you kindly for taking the time to read and leaving such a nice comment. Alana
Poet In Pink
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8 posted 01-04-2018 02:42 PM       View Profile for Poet In Pink   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet In Pink

Thankies Lori Belle for your sweet reply   Glad you enjoyed! Pinkymelt
Poet In Pink
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9 posted 01-04-2018 02:44 PM       View Profile for Poet In Pink   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet In Pink

Thank you for your kind reply Jerry Always so nice to hear from you ~ I didn't notice the PIP thing...Kinda cool   Alana
Poet In Pink
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10 posted 01-04-2018 02:45 PM       View Profile for Poet In Pink   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet In Pink

Thank you for your visit and sweet words Blues Always so good to hear from you ~ Hope you had a wonderful holiday ~ Alana
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Florida, USA


11 posted 01-08-2018 03:37 AM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Very beautiful poem. I love romantic poetry!
Hugs, Ethel

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RhymingReason
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since 01-06-2018
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UK


12 posted 01-08-2018 04:44 AM       View Profile for RhymingReason   Email RhymingReason   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RhymingReason

Lovely emotional exploration of the yearning which may come from a long distance relationship, maybe berevement or even being the "other woman".

Reading your words in glowing pink adds a special atmosphere to the poem.

Your delicacy and subtelty are elements which are often lacking from my own poetry.
Poet In Pink
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13 posted 01-09-2018 03:10 PM       View Profile for Poet In Pink   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet In Pink

Thank you so much Ethel ~ I'm happy to hear you enjoyed this Appreciate your time and comment ~ Huggerz Alana
Poet In Pink
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14 posted 01-09-2018 03:13 PM       View Profile for Poet In Pink   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet In Pink

Pleased to meet you RR   Thank you so much for reading and leaving such a kind reply ~ Much appreciated.  Look forward to reading one of your poems as well. Alana
 
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