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Bluesy Socrateaser
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0 posted 12-20-2017 02:51 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

It was a night caressed by warm summer breezes whose fingers were eager to do just what pleases,
the waters were tranquil and calm

The stars shone so brightly yet touched my eyes lightly,
moonbeams danced in sarongs

Their ballroom was grand and each grain of sand
reflected great crystalline splendor

Huge columns of stone stood all alone, what they've seen,
no man can remember

But for their uses, I found no excuses when searching my soul for content
Until she is free and comes home to me, it's all memories which I have spent


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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 12-20-2017 05:08 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

This is beautiful Bluesy, even the bittersweet ending. Your imagery is so unique.

"The stars shone so brightly yet touched my eyes lightly,
moonbeams danced in sarongs"

I love the way you write! ~L
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2 posted 12-20-2017 11:23 PM       View Profile for Poet In Pink   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet In Pink

Just think of all the new precious memories you will make Beautifully brushed heart words Bluesy ~ Enjoyed
Bluesy Socrateaser
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3 posted 12-22-2017 04:12 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Yes, you're right, Miss Pinky.

Now, as the time draws near, everything I do has her scent about it. I'm feeling that time is no longer my enemy.

Thanks so much, dear friend.  


...just bein' Bluesy
Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 12-29-2017 03:29 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Thank you so much, Miss Lori. I appreciate your comments a great deal.

...just bein' Bluesy

 
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