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From Holidays To Hollow Days: Nothing Is Anything Without Her...

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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0 posted 12-19-2017 12:10 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

It's another late night solitude for me, my angel, and invariably, Iím missing you
The music thatís playing enhances my senses as I look for paper to fill with words and imagery

It's been a six o clock day all day and the sky's turned indigo purple lit from underneath with an orange city glow
The family arrives early, as fifty-year-old children in black suits and skirts find their way to church where their memories live and their cheeks are wet dried

It's another late night solitude for me, my angel, and invariably, without you, my emotions obliterate any sense of reality in me
The family mingles amongst themselves and chatter on with their incessant Ďbroken recordí recitations which Iíve come to deplore

...I miss you, my darling. Thatís all. I miss you.


...just bein' Bluesy
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 12-19-2017 05:47 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Wow talk about condensed! You wrote volumes in so few words! You accomplished sooo much with so little. Very impressive. That was a painful little shot in the arm there fella.
~L
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2 posted 12-19-2017 11:46 PM       View Profile for Poet In Pink   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet In Pink

Life  can become pretty mundane when we face it without the one we love...Great title...Fits this one perfectly ~ Here's to the day when hollow is filled with happy   Enjoyed as always Bluesy
Bluesy Socrateaser
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3 posted 12-20-2017 02:55 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Thank you so much for your exuberant reply, Miss Lori. I appreciate your every word.

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 12-20-2017 02:59 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

You're quite right on all fronts, Miss Pinky.
quote:
" Here's to the day when hollow is filled with happy"
**~clink~**  

...just bein' Bluesy

 
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