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Poet In Pink
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0 posted 2017-12-17 06:08 PM






Sometimes I just like to sit and ponder
Just close my eyes and let my thoughts wander
Shut out the present and visit the past
Where young innocence makes all good things last

Here in the safe haven of memory
Nothing or no one can ever hurt me
I run through the meadow without a care
I'm wild and free with the wind through my hair

My happiness knows not one boundary
As my eyes behold all lifes mystery
I sing with the bluebirds~hum with the bees
Race rabbits for fun and climb old oak trees

Pick dandelions and make a bouquet
Stop to chase butterflies along the way
Splash my little bare piggies in the stream
As I contentedly sit and day~dream

Sometimes I just like to sit and ponder
Just close my eyes and let my thoughts wander


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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror
1 posted 2017-12-17 08:34 PM


I no sooner read your first two lines, Miss Pinky, when I had already decided to quote them. But as I read, I became more engaged with you and your "wandering thoughts" and realized that the first two lines weren't going to be enough, that I would have to quote the entire poem. I elected to tell you this rather than merely quoting any one part.

I, too think such thoughts Miss Pinky, but I'm not wearing a dress when I do.  

Lovely poetry, lovely image and lovely tune...makes one ~sigh~.     


...just bein' Bluesy

Boomer Styles
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since 2014-03-02
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South Side Of Success
2 posted 2017-12-18 04:14 AM


I loved the playfulness in your poem.  

One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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3 posted 2017-12-18 05:10 PM


Pinkythinky,
I swear girl, pick any topic and let you paint it your perfect color of pink and behold, you have a gem on your hands. Your rhymes are so soft and unimposing. Always a delight! ~L

Poet In Pink
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4 posted 2017-12-18 10:28 PM


Thank you so much for your more than kind words Bluesy ~ Your replies always leave me smiling   
Poet In Pink
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5 posted 2017-12-18 10:29 PM


Thank you for the read and your reply Boomer ~ Happy to hear you enjoyed Alana
Poet In Pink
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6 posted 2017-12-18 10:31 PM


Dear Lori Belle thank you so much for your sweet words of praise ~ Your visits and comments always mean so much Pinkythinky
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