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A Sudden Storm

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JerryPat2
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it was raining torrents
we stood there
notwithstanding
and she . . .
with her sweet tongue's effort
cleansed my past
put a voodoo charm on me
teased my blushing
with a silken moist trace
a ruffled whisper
and a kiss which bonded
like no other
caused my stalwart to falter
nearly giving way
her lips left my own
in a mad fluttering of need
touched, but unfulfilled
I shivered, reached for her fantastic
she was boldly outgoing
enfolded me inside her unusual
and kiss by tender kiss she fed me her adorable
I felt myself glowing
with delight and ecstasy
it made me incredibly complete
before I'd been empty
now I surrendered to the
emancipation of my passion
she brought me from then to now
sharing love in the midst of
a South Louisiana torrential rainstorm

ŠNovember 2, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror


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Some are recalled quite vividly, and then there are a few that shouldn't be recalled at all. Glad you shared this one, Jerry.

But it wasn't always raining in the South. Had a little snow down there in the 'Rouge.

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
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Yeah you're right. We received probably over an inch of the white stuff here in Thibodaux.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Poet In Pink
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MI


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A passionate write from start to finish Jerry     Much enjoyed!  Alana
JerryPat2
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Thanks, Alana, I have had computer trouble for a week, good to be back.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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