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Poet In Pink
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0 posted 2017-12-03 01:52 AM






There is a crisp chill in the air tonight
I pull my pink parka up around me close
As memories of you nip at my heels

You and I walked this same path together
It now seems like a million years ago
Holding hands and laughing into the wind

The stars twinkled celebrating our love
The moon shone down bathing us in soft glow
All was right in the land of forever

Whispered promises skitter through the night
Like dead Autumn leaves that dance underfoot
They are here today and gone tomorrow

My heart and soul aches for our yesterdays
My mind sleepwalks in the essence of you
I wistfully walk in thought of what if...

There is a crisp chill in the air tonight
I pull my pink parka up around me close
As memories of you nip at my heels

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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1 posted 2017-12-03 02:03 AM


Such a beautifully sad piece, Miss Pinky...
quote:
"My heart and soul aches for our yesterdays
My mind sleepwalks in the essence of you
I wistfully walk in thought of what if..."
...and then this. I feel it it in my heart, as well.

Very beautiful.

...just bein' Bluesy

Poet In Pink
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2 posted 2017-12-03 02:09 AM


Having someone feel your words is the grandest gift of all ~ Thank you Bluesy for sharing & feeling them   You made my night
Bluesy Socrateaser
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3 posted 2017-12-03 02:15 AM


You have a gift, Miss Pinky. Not only for pulling at heartstrings and showing your own...but to meld your heartfelt poetry with music.

Extraordinary.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2017-12-03 06:00 AM


Miss Pinkytune! I'm with Bluesy 100% on this one! Fantastic! ! ~L
JerryPat2
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5 posted 2017-12-03 12:01 PM


"All was right in the land of forever" . . . Isn't this the grandest look back at love forevermore (we thought)?!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

2islander2
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6 posted 2017-12-04 04:44 PM


a great mélancolique poetry, like a song in the heart


yann


Poet In Pink
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7 posted 2017-12-05 06:02 PM


Again I Thank you Bluesy for your kind words ~ Oft times I listen to music as I write ~ It inspires  
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8 posted 2017-12-05 06:04 PM


Thank you dear Lori for your echo   Appreciate your time and words always ~ Huggerz Pinkytune
Poet In Pink
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9 posted 2017-12-05 06:05 PM


Thank you for reading and your kind thought Jerry ~ You know what they say....Hindsight is 20/20  
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10 posted 2017-12-05 06:06 PM


Thank you kindly for reading Yann     Always so nice to hear from you ~ Alana
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