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Poet In Pink
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There is a crisp chill in the air tonight
I pull my pink parka up around me close
As memories of you nip at my heels

You and I walked this same path together
It now seems like a million years ago
Holding hands and laughing into the wind

The stars twinkled celebrating our love
The moon shone down bathing us in soft glow
All was right in the land of forever

Whispered promises skitter through the night
Like dead Autumn leaves that dance underfoot
They are here today and gone tomorrow

My heart and soul aches for our yesterdays
My mind sleepwalks in the essence of you
I wistfully walk in thought of what if...

There is a crisp chill in the air tonight
I pull my pink parka up around me close
As memories of you nip at my heels

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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Such a beautifully sad piece, Miss Pinky...
quote:
"My heart and soul aches for our yesterdays
My mind sleepwalks in the essence of you
I wistfully walk in thought of what if..."
...and then this. I feel it it in my heart, as well.

Very beautiful.

...just bein' Bluesy

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2 posted 12-03-2017 02:09 AM       View Profile for Poet In Pink   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet In Pink

Having someone feel your words is the grandest gift of all ~ Thank you Bluesy for sharing & feeling them   You made my night
Bluesy Socrateaser
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You have a gift, Miss Pinky. Not only for pulling at heartstrings and showing your own...but to meld your heartfelt poetry with music.

Extraordinary.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 12-03-2017 06:00 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Miss Pinkytune! I'm with Bluesy 100% on this one! Fantastic! ! ~L
JerryPat2
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"All was right in the land of forever" . . . Isn't this the grandest look back at love forevermore (we thought)?!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

2islander2
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6 posted 12-04-2017 04:44 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

a great mélancolique poetry, like a song in the heart


yann

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Again I Thank you Bluesy for your kind words ~ Oft times I listen to music as I write ~ It inspires  
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Thank you dear Lori for your echo   Appreciate your time and words always ~ Huggerz Pinkytune
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Thank you for reading and your kind thought Jerry ~ You know what they say....Hindsight is 20/20  
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Thank you kindly for reading Yann     Always so nice to hear from you ~ Alana
 
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