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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 11-27-2017 05:40 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

I wish I could love you
enough to put your worries
to rest.
I wish I could assure you
so you’d have confidence
that everything will work out.
I wish that I could support you
in a way that would
give you solace.
I wish I could calm
your mind
and give you peace.
I wish that I could comfort you
and for a few minutes
make it all go away.

LGR©11/27/2017

© Copyright 2017 Lori Grosser Rhoden - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 11-27-2017 06:38 PM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

Beautifully worded poem of love to another. This is very special, and I wish those things for him and especially for you.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 11-27-2017 07:04 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Thank you very much Jerry. It has been a long haul of feeling helpless for both of us.
He is getting better every day but still has a long way to go before he gets his umph back
He is impatient to get out of the recliner. I
truly appreciate your concern. ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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If I were to wish for something relative to your loving poetry, Lori Rhoden, I would wish that 'he' read it before I did.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 11-27-2017 08:43 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Bluesy,
I read it to him when I posted it. It hit home. He wishes the same thing. ~L
Poet In Pink
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Such tender and loving wishes dear Lori Lou   Keep doing what your doing and remember...Wishes do come true     Big Huggerz
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 11-28-2017 06:20 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Pinkyhugness,
I'll remember you said that! Thanks. ~L
jwesley
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7 posted 12-02-2017 10:31 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Some words are not read . . .

they're simply felt
on they way to the heart . . .


j
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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8 posted 12-03-2017 06:04 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Dear Jimmy, good to hear from you, my friend.
And you are so right, thank you. ~L
 
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