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Tales From The Cabin That Smokes: Book Ten...{De}Facing A Trial By Snowflake...

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror


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Who turned the light out? Iíve not seen enough
Were you hiding, my darling? You know Iím feeling so rough
Don't turn away from me now, you donít know the way
Oh, where is my voice when thereís so much to say

Telling your father what your mother must know,
Iím feeling weak at the knees, I really should go
So much has ended, I fear Iíll never grow old
Living in daydreams while walking through snow

So much confusion as I think of back home,
I was strong as an oak tree but weak was my poem
So, what have I done on this page without ink?
Iím on the twelfth line and find it harder to think

Now, where it was summer, the winter has come
Millions of snowflakes now see what I've done,
The old man is gone, leaving me with no choice,
but to sing my way home, just me and my voice.


...just bein' Bluesy
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin'


1 posted 11-27-2017 04:44 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Now you are getting really good! You pulled bits and pieces of nothing together and magically made a poem. A poet after my own heart. ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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2 posted 11-27-2017 01:55 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Thank you so much for reading and leaving such a fine compliment, Miss Lori.

You're appreciated!

...just bein' Bluesy

 
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