Tales From The Cabin That Smokes: Book Ten...{De}Facing A Trial By Snowflake...

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Tales From The Cabin That Smokes: Book Ten...{De}Facing A Trial By Snowflake...

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2017-11-27 03:56 AM

Who turned the light out? I’ve not seen enough
Were you hiding, my darling? You know I’m feeling so rough
Don't turn away from me now, you don’t know the way
Oh, where is my voice when there’s so much to say

Telling your father what your mother must know,
I’m feeling weak at the knees, I really should go
So much has ended, I fear I’ll never grow old
Living in daydreams while walking through snow

So much confusion as I think of back home,
I was strong as an oak tree but weak was my poem
So, what have I done on this page without ink?
I’m on the twelfth line and find it harder to think

Now, where it was summer, the winter has come
Millions of snowflakes now see what I've done,
The old man is gone, leaving me with no choice,
but to sing my way home, just me and my voice.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2017-11-27 04:44 AM

Now you are getting really good! You pulled bits and pieces of nothing together and magically made a poem. A poet after my own heart. ~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

2 posted 2017-11-27 01:55 PM

Thank you so much for reading and leaving such a fine compliment, Miss Lori.

You're appreciated!

...just bein' Bluesy

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