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I Hate it When I知 Right

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin'


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I hate it when I知 right
about something I壇 rather be wrong.
I sense something is about to begin.
Sure enough, here we go again.
My intuition gives me ammunition
to hedge my bet without regret.
You rarely give me cause for concern
a lesson I致e had to learn
over time.
But worry over you
I truly do.
I can see the mountain you climb.
I can hear your pain
and your fear has my ear
as you struggle for every gain.
Impatience has pushed your frustration
to your limitation.
There is not much I can do
other than continue
to be right about you.

LGRゥ11/25/17

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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1 posted 11-25-2017 11:25 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

quote:
"I hate it when I知 right
about something I壇 rather be wrong"

        ***~~~~~~~~~***

"There is not much I can do
other than continue
to be right about you"
Profound 'bookends' to volumes of trials, Miss Lori.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 11-25-2017 08:01 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Interesting description, Bluesy. I like your perspective. ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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Good blues, country/blues lyrics...       

Luther did okay with these lyrics and they're no better than your own: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nWAUCVbnDUg


...just bein' Bluesy
 
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