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Completion Of Transitioning Too Into One: It Was Good For Me Two...

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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0 posted 11-12-2017 12:31 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Baby, you took my breath away as you woke me with a smile
Your kiss was like no other...and it lingered for a while

You ran your fingers through my hair and continued down my spine,
bringing them up my back again while telling me you’re mine

I longed so for your lips again, as I had just moments before
Then to take you in a warm embrace and whisper, “I want more...”

You drew your parted lips to mine and my heart...it skipped a beat
You softly stroked my face, my love and soon we were complete


...just bein' Bluesy
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 11-12-2017 05:17 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden


sigh...That is the sweetest set of lines to come from out of a refrigerator box under a bridge that I have ever heard. I bet you warmed up your box with this one . ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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2 posted 11-12-2017 03:03 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Many thanks, Lori Rhoden, It's for sure modern living hasn't changed you a bit! Love is where you find it, I always say. Well, I say other things too...but I wouldn't want to be banished to the "Mature" forums just for a "Freudian slip".

...just bein' Bluesy

Poet In Pink
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Is it hot in here or is it just me?!  lol  I think I will just stick with a WoW! Passionately penned     Alana
Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 11-16-2017 05:16 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Thanks so much, Miss Pinky, but hot? Aw...that's because Lori Rhoden tore the thermostat off the wall! Now who's gonna fix that?   



...just bein' Bluesy

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