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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2017-11-09 02:49 PM


He’s counting the miles.
I’m counting the minutes.
He says he’ll be home
in time for supper.
I wonder just what
time that is exactly.
He tells me
that he misses me.
I tell him
I miss him too.
It has only been
a few days.
But we are rarely apart,
so it seems longer.
His empty recliner
makes me a little sad.
But it won’t be empty much longer.
The darned old TV
will be blaring the news again.
And he’ll be waking me up
to roll me over because I’m snoring.
Funny the things you do
and do not miss,
like his kisses
and tripping over his boots.

LGR©11/9/17


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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2017-11-09 06:43 PM


Oh Lori you say it so good.
Your ending is perfectly delightful.

Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror
2 posted 2017-11-10 12:37 PM


I'm with Blues, Miss Lori. Just don't try to do both at the same time...

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2017-11-10 05:26 AM


Blues,
You always say the nicest things! I appreciate you so much! ~L

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2017-11-10 05:29 AM


But Bluesy, I'm a klutz and its bound to happen, cause I'm cool like that! ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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5 posted 2017-11-10 11:24 PM


...and awesome! Don't forget that!

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2017-11-11 02:15 PM


...oh yeah! Right on. ~L
Poet In Pink
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7 posted 2017-11-11 02:46 PM


Sometimes a person just doesn't know what they have...Until they don't have it any longer..Even the annoying things become dear to us     Much enjoyed Lori ~ Alana
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
8 posted 2017-11-12 05:46 AM


Pinkypersona,
He just got back from Idaho 2 days and winds up in the hospital with pneumonia, where he'll be for the next couple of days. His boots are right in the middle of the floor where he left them. Think I'll leave them there a while. ~L

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