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A Flash in the Pan

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 11-09-2017 05:50 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

She was dark as sin
Then she invited him in
And trouble began

She treated him mean
He felt himself in a dream
Nightmarish it seemed

She twisted his heart
Playing games right from the start
Unwilling to part

She would always lie
He gave up trying to try
Now she had to die

He made up a plan
Smack her with a frying pan
Hes a happy man.


LGR(C)11/9/17
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Bluesy Socrateaser
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1 posted 11-09-2017 12:01 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

She was dark as sin
Then she invited him in
And trouble began

Inexperienced
He smelled fresh from her laundry
Still damp behind ears


She treated him mean
He felt himself in a dream
Nightmarish it seemed

He fell for her charms
Learning to like her abuse
No use resisting


She twisted his heart
Playing games right from the start
Unwilling to part

Putty for her play
Molding him into a man
Demented and hard


She would always lie
He gave up trying to try
Now she had to die

She taught him quite well
He adapted to her ways
His sly grin spreading


He made up a plan
Smack her with a frying pan
Hes a happy man

Loving cast iron
Never fails an evil chef
She tasted SO good


Ha-ha-ha! This WAS fun, Lori Rhoden! I just couldn't get mine to rhyme like yours!


...just bein' Bluesy
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 11-09-2017 12:44 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

You did great! I rhymed the first one by accident then I had to rhyme the rest. That was fun! ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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3 posted 11-10-2017 11:18 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

...'atcha!

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 11-11-2017 02:15 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

God bless you!
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Fun collab ~ Enjoyed reading
 
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