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Secret Slumbers Of A Saturday Night Sage

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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0 posted 11-07-2017 02:27 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

In my secret slumbering dreams my love,
our bodies flow gracefully along quiet streams
Naked in the moon's pale-blue luminance,
we bath in our seething waters of love

An angelís breath wafts misty over our stream,
forming shadows of loverís who have come and gone
I touch your heated skin, feeling its longing to be kissed,
and feel your soft, gentle caresses with an ever so light feeling of ease

My longings surrender to dawnís tender claim,
as all those many visions of loving you begin to slip away,
sending a shiver through my awakening frame,
as the first break of light finds me calling your name...


...just bein' Bluesy
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 11-07-2017 05:32 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Sweet Bluesy!
You have got romance down, my friend. Not too mushy, not too blatantly sexual etc. A perfect balance. I'm lovin' it! ~L  
Bluesy Socrateaser
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2 posted 11-07-2017 04:56 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Thank you, Lori Rhoden...for your compliments, your observation of my blending, and for not putting a comma after "Sweet".

...just bein' Bluesy

Poet In Pink
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A most tender and passionate write ~ Love the visions your words conjure up throughout this one ~ Alana
Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 11-16-2017 05:25 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

You're very kind, Miss Pinky. Thank you so much.

...just bein' Bluesy

 
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