Secret Slumbers Of A Saturday Night Sage

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Open Poetry #50

Secret Slumbers Of A Saturday Night Sage

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2017-11-07 02:27 AM

In my secret slumbering dreams my love,
our bodies flow gracefully along quiet streams
Naked in the moon's pale-blue luminance,
we bath in our seething waters of love

An angel’s breath wafts misty over our stream,
forming shadows of lover’s who have come and gone
I touch your heated skin, feeling its longing to be kissed,
and feel your soft, gentle caresses with an ever so light feeling of ease

My longings surrender to dawn’s tender claim,
as all those many visions of loving you begin to slip away,
sending a shiver through my awakening frame,
as the first break of light finds me calling your name...

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2017-11-07 05:32 AM

Sweet Bluesy!
You have got romance down, my friend. Not too mushy, not too blatantly sexual etc. A perfect balance. I'm lovin' it! ~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

2 posted 2017-11-07 04:56 PM

Thank you, Lori Rhoden...for your compliments, your observation of my blending, and for not putting a comma after "Sweet".

...just bein' Bluesy

Poet In Pink
Senior Member
Posts 1066
MI

3 posted 2017-11-16 03:06 PM

A most tender and passionate write ~ Love the visions your words conjure up throughout this one ~ Alana

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

4 posted 2017-11-16 05:25 PM

You're very kind, Miss Pinky. Thank you so much.

...just bein' Bluesy

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