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Poetess Protracted On My Palliasse

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror


0 posted 11-06-2017 01:26 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Deep breathing on a crisp, pensive afternoon,
exhaling proof of a thought captured
in a wisp of frozen air,
then dispersed into the universe,
like the sigh of a poetess…wistful and alive

...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 11-06-2017 05:28 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

That is downright beautiful Bluesy. Your image is vivid yet gentle on the mind and heart. I really like it a lot. ~L
JerryPat2
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2 posted 11-06-2017 08:42 AM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

Excellent choice of words. Terse and decisive. Makes for a great read.

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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Thank you, Miss Lori.
I enjoyed reading your reply.

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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Thank you for your complimentary reply, Jerry.

...just bein' Bluesy

Poet In Pink
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Such a beautiful thought you have creatively penned Bluesy ~ This poetess is sighing   Alana
Bluesy Socrateaser
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...and you are so 'wistful and alive'. I know, Miss Pinky. I've read you.

...just bein' Bluesy

 
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