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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror


0 posted 11-02-2017 03:53 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Flaming stars dance on sundial faces as pulsating sounds echo from far away places

Lovers’ pursued down a never-ending staircase, like a dog in pursuit of his tail

Wondering why the pendulum swings while their minds have captured an inanimate thing

A Queen of hearts in a mechanical sling, as a treasonous knight deals the Crimson Stained King

Fireflies weave helpless through electrified wings
as his soul escapes from a body that sings

Unaware that his thoughts had been betrayed...
the Crimson King’s mind was so easily swayed


...just bein' Bluesy
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 11-02-2017 05:36 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

I don't claim to understand it, never the less I like it. But then I am used to liking things I don't understand....like men. lol.
~L
LeeJ
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2 posted 11-02-2017 11:52 AM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

wonderful write, even though I don't understand, would you mind explaining, maybe later....
Bluesy Socrateaser
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3 posted 11-06-2017 01:35 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

It is to you and it is to me
and if we two cannot agree...
it is to me.

Sent with a smile and I hope it is received the same.  

Many thanks for reading and your kind compliments, Lori Rhoden and Lee. You're very much appreciated!  


...just bein' Bluesy
Poet In Pink
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4 posted 11-08-2017 07:20 PM       View Profile for Poet In Pink   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet In Pink

Well Bluesy I asked Alice and the Mad-Hatter to give me the inside scoop on this one....BUT they weren't having that! Soooo...I decided to just roll with the flow on this one...I enjoyed your write and my version of it     Alana
Bluesy Socrateaser
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5 posted 11-08-2017 08:57 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

I like the way your flow rolls, Miss Pinky!

Thanks for...um, yeah...

...just bein' Bluesy

 
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