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Revelations In A Bathroom Stall...(No romance to be found here Miss Lori...)

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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0 posted 11-01-2017 01:00 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Iím not sure when I first heard the intermittent

'tinkle-rush-tinkle-rush' of an obviously older,

frailer, prostrate in the stall next to mine,

but Iím certain it was at the movies...yes, thatís for sure

And I wondered with just a tinge of reverence in my bladder,

how long would it be before I envy the relief I hear,

...in the stall next to mine?

So, I finished myself, with a little 'spurt' at the end,

and went back to my movie without heeding the omen squeezed from my ureters

the foretelling of timeís pace... and my own all too soon need to watch movies at home

...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 11-01-2017 06:23 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

And I thought my poem was honest. Way to tell it like it is and will be. Gutsy too, as men don't usually talk openly about their plumbing. This was very entertaining. ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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2 posted 11-01-2017 11:27 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Entertaining?...No more than your reply, Lori Rhoden, for which I thank you profusely. The only other observation was that his shoes had no shine.

I don't know why I was looking down...you'd think after all this time there'd be no need to aim...   

...just bein' Bluesy

LeeJ
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well all righty than.....

LOL

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 11-02-2017 04:19 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

As one who lives with a tinkle-rush and cleans the toilet, I can assure you it is ALWAYS important to aim. Or better yet, in case your aim declines with your eyesight or you aren't as good in the dark as you think you are... just sit down and save your standing up for the Men's room and the great outdoors. ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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5 posted 11-06-2017 01:29 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

You're a wise woman, Lori Rhoden. It's also quieter in close quarters.

...just bein' Bluesy

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To Pee or not to Pee that is the question!  lol  Thanks for the giggle Bluesy   Alana
Bluesy Socrateaser
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7 posted 11-08-2017 08:54 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

You could have used any font, any color, and signed in under any 'nom de plume', and I'd have known it was you, Miss Pinky! Ha!

Mant thanks!

...just bein' Bluesy

 
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