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Reflections In The Windows Of Your Soul

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror


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As I looked into your eyes tonight baby, only for a moment,
I saw more than enough to tell me that you love me

When I looked into your eyes tonight darling, you looked back into mine,
if only for an instant, and I liked what it was I was seeing

Then you turned your eyes away from mine and told me 'not to look'
afraid perhaps, that I might see too much, maybe more than you wanted me to

But you kept looking back into my eyes, liking what you saw
Unable to look away, knowing that you still wanted me, baby

Lover, when I looked into your eyes, I saw our whole future together,
if only for a brief glimpse, still...it was there nonetheless

Yes, I looked into your soul tonight my angel, if only for a moment,
but still...it was more than enough to tell me that I love you...and that you love me



...just bein' Bluesy
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 10-31-2017 05:00 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

These are more than just pretty words you got going on here Bluesy. Love doesn't land lightly in your back yard. It is a beautiful thing to see. ~L
JerryPat2
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2 posted 10-31-2017 09:16 AM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

That is all that need to be said sometimes, and the eyes says it best . . . Always . . .

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~
Bluesy Socrateaser
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3 posted 10-31-2017 12:11 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

I'm so happy to know you see as you do, Lori Rhoden.

You wrote; "Love doesn't land lightly in your back yard"...Yes, you are a poet[ess] as I see and read you.

Many thanks...     

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 10-31-2017 12:14 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Thank you, Jerry. I appreciate your reading and your replying as you did.

Many thanks to you, Sir!

...just bein' Bluesy

psychofemale
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5 posted 10-31-2017 08:12 PM       View Profile for psychofemale   Email psychofemale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for psychofemale

What a sweet poem you have here. I can tell there is a lot of conviction in your words. Nicely done.
Bluesy Socrateaser
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6 posted 10-31-2017 09:01 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

You not only honor me with your pleasant words of reply, PF...but also with your very first post.

I'm eternally grateful...

...just bein' Bluesy

 
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