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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror


0 posted 10-29-2017 12:30 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Delicious moonlight pours over your skin,
shining like ivory set in the finest gold,
flowing in delicate curves that best resemble
places where beautiful things begin.

Raindrops freckle my windows as they fall upon you
and within you, as you lay on my bed, like a goddess at rest.
You, my sweet lover, my irreverently sexy 'house guest',
hiding now, in a place I wish to be.

Last evening, we traveled the sacred way
up your river of ecstasy, through the night, impeded only by a silky
sheet and a wine glass, and when you stood,
the sheet fell away, leaving you to the moonlight.

...and I, to recall the magic.


...just bein' Bluesy
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 10-29-2017 05:56 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Wow! That was just dreamy the way you said everything without saying much of anything at all. Thank you for not kissing and telling all the details. You are a class act.
~L
nakdthoughts
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2 posted 10-29-2017 10:49 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

Beautifully expressed!
JerryPat2
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3 posted 10-29-2017 06:36 PM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

Heh.Heh . . .And all this time I thought you liked the details Lori.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

JerryPat2
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4 posted 10-29-2017 07:43 PM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

This poem reminds me of Big Valley and surrounding areas. And a good time was had by all.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
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5 posted 10-29-2017 08:19 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

quote:
" Thank you for not kissing and telling all the details..."
I'll never tell another living soul, Lori Rhoden...if you don't.  



...just bein' Bluesy
Bluesy Socrateaser
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6 posted 10-29-2017 08:21 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

I'm so pleased you came to read and comment, Maureen. Thank you so very much!

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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7 posted 10-29-2017 08:23 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

I appreciate your comments, Jerry.

...just bein' Bluesy

psychofemale
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8 posted 10-31-2017 08:52 PM       View Profile for psychofemale   Email psychofemale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for psychofemale

A very passionate piece. Well written!!!!

*These evil vultures always win*

Bluesy Socrateaser
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9 posted 10-31-2017 09:02 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Many thanks, PF!

...just bein' Bluesy

Poet In Pink
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10 posted 11-08-2017 08:00 PM       View Profile for Poet In Pink   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet In Pink

A beautifully painted portrait of passion Bluesy ~ A lovely write to be sure ~ Much enjoyed ~ Alana
Bluesy Socrateaser
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11 posted 11-08-2017 08:51 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

You are so kind, Miss Pinky.

...just bein' Bluesy

 
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