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Just You and Me

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 10-26-2017 02:12 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

I want to lay in your arms for an afternoon,
just to feel you safe and close to me.
Maybe wed lay outside on a sunny autumn day
and make shapes in the clouds overhead.
Breathing easy with all worries aside,
wed make small talk between I love yous.
Perhaps we would fall into a fit of silly
and laugh until were in tears.
We might just fall asleep dreaming
the dreams of lovers and wake up in a cuddle.
I want a little you and me time
with no distractions or time schedules
so we can just be you and me
the way I like us to be.

LGR10/26/17

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 11-07-2002
Posts 917
In The Mirror


1 posted 10-26-2017 02:32 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

quote:
"I want a little you and me time
with no distractions or time schedules
so we can just be you and me
the way I like us to be"
It's easy to see how you see the "romantic" aspects in so many of the poems of others, Lori Rhoden...because you are one.

Beautifully romantic.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 10-26-2017 03:32 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Yes I are one for sure, doesn't take much for this ole girl to get misty-eyed over a Hallmark card. ~L
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside


3 posted 10-26-2017 04:48 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

It's so good to read your "worry free" poetry.  This is lovely, Lori.
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 10-26-2017 06:26 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Blues,
Oh no doubt about the "worry free". hugs! ~L
psychofemale
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Tennessee


5 posted 10-31-2017 08:28 PM       View Profile for psychofemale   Email psychofemale   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for psychofemale

Love this. Something we can all strive towards.

*These evil vultures always win*

 
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