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One More Day...One Less Dream

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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0 posted 10-24-2017 07:09 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Listening for a silent sound
Touching air and feeling your skin
as we fall into Egyptian linens

So many secrets from afar
Dimly lit in distant thoughts
as you rest easy within my heart

Awakening without you against me
is surely among my harshest realities
leaving me to dream once more

...and ponder


...just bein' Bluesy
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BluesSerenade
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1 posted 10-24-2017 08:56 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

The reality of life and love is harsh indeed..therein lies the bittersweetness of dreams.

Your poem tugs ever so gently...


Bluesy Socrateaser
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2 posted 10-24-2017 10:30 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

You are right, Blues...and you know why.

You're appreciated and I thank you.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 10-25-2017 09:35 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Bluesy,
You do bittersweet better than anyone I know. You have painful twinges mixed ever so carefully with the love. ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 10-25-2017 01:18 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Many thanks, Lori Rhoden for your compliment.

Regarding "painful twinges mixed ever so carefully with the love"...we all have some of this, haven't we? I know you deal with this 'mix' every day.

...just bein' Bluesy

psychofemale
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5 posted 10-31-2017 08:53 PM       View Profile for psychofemale   Email psychofemale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for psychofemale

Beautiful!

*These evil vultures always win*

Bluesy Socrateaser
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6 posted 10-31-2017 09:04 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Thank you so much, PF! I appreciate your visit and your kind reply.

...just bein' Bluesy

 
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