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Open Poetry #50

One More Day...One Less Dream

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2017-10-24 07:09 PM

Listening for a silent sound
Touching air and feeling your skin
as we fall into Egyptian linens

So many secrets from afar
Dimly lit in distant thoughts
as you rest easy within my heart

Awakening without you against me
is surely among my harshest realities
leaving me to dream once more

...and ponder

...just bein' Bluesy

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2017-10-24 08:56 PM

The reality of life and love is harsh indeed..therein lies the bittersweetness of dreams.

Your poem tugs ever so gently...

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

2 posted 2017-10-24 10:30 PM

You are right, Blues...and you know why.

You're appreciated and I thank you.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2017-10-25 09:35 AM

Bluesy,
You do bittersweet better than anyone I know. You have painful twinges mixed ever so carefully with the love. ~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

4 posted 2017-10-25 01:18 PM

Many thanks, Lori Rhoden for your compliment.

Regarding "painful twinges mixed ever so carefully with the love"...we all have some of this, haven't we? I know you deal with this 'mix' every day.

...just bein' Bluesy

psychofemale
Junior Member
Posts 18
Tennessee

5 posted 2017-10-31 08:53 PM

Beautiful!

*These evil vultures always win*

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

6 posted 2017-10-31 09:04 PM

Thank you so much, PF! I appreciate your visit and your kind reply.

...just bein' Bluesy

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