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Bluesy Socrateaser
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0 posted 10-22-2017 01:25 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Once upon a time...
there were pretty words so true...
words which seemed so real to me

Though those words are gone
and the time which was has passed...
words still come to call

Words which form so true
cascading like waterfalls...
words which come from you

I'll always love you...

...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 10-22-2017 02:58 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Bluesy,
This is bittersweet.  I like the way you left the "I'll always love you..." dangling at the end. ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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2 posted 10-22-2017 05:42 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

How very nice of you, Lori Rhoden. Many thanks.

...just bein' Bluesy

LindaJWolff
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I like how you described the words, the emotions...then ending with "I'll always love you!

Linda J. Wolff, a poetic wordsmith.

latearrival
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beautifulwords. martyjo/latearrival

Bluesy Socrateaser
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5 posted 10-23-2017 03:02 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Good to see you here Linda...and many thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate it very much.

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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You're very kind Jo...many thanks.

...just bein' Bluesy

LeeJ
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every single person we meet along the way, is supposed to be, to fulfill our journey.

Bluesy Socrateaser
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Yes, Miss Lee. Everyone and everything.

Thank you so much.

...just bein' Bluesy

Poet In Pink
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Your prettily penned words definitely cascade down my own melancholy memories...Gone but not forgotten blooms within the garden of love and life...Much enjoyed Bluesy ~ Alana
Bluesy Socrateaser
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...and I enjoyed your visit, Miss Pinky

...just bein' Bluesy

 
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