Pretty Words & Perrenial Pleasantries Of The Past

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Open Poetry #50

Pretty Words & Perrenial Pleasantries Of The Past

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

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In The Mirror

0 posted 2017-10-22 01:25 PM

Once upon a time...
there were pretty words so true...
words which seemed so real to me

Though those words are gone
and the time which was has passed...
words still come to call

Words which form so true
cascading like waterfalls...
words which come from you

I'll always love you...

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2017-10-22 02:58 PM

Bluesy,
This is bittersweet. I like the way you left the "I'll always love you..." dangling at the end. ~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
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2 posted 2017-10-22 05:42 PM

How very nice of you, Lori Rhoden. Many thanks.

...just bein' Bluesy

LindaJWolff
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since 2017-10-22

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Seattle, WA

3 posted 2017-10-22 08:33 PM

I like how you described the words, the emotions...then ending with "I'll always love you!

Linda J. Wolff, a poetic wordsmith.

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21

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Florida

4 posted 2017-10-22 11:08 PM

beautifulwords. martyjo/latearrival

Bluesy Socrateaser
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5 posted 2017-10-23 03:02 AM

Good to see you here Linda...and many thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate it very much.

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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6 posted 2017-10-23 03:03 AM

You're very kind Jo...many thanks.

...just bein' Bluesy

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2017-10-24 06:56 AM

every single person we meet along the way, is supposed to be, to fulfill our journey.

Bluesy Socrateaser
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8 posted 2017-10-24 05:10 PM

Yes, Miss Lee. Everyone and everything.

Thank you so much.

...just bein' Bluesy

Poet In Pink
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MI

9 posted 2017-11-08 06:57 PM

Your prettily penned words definitely cascade down my own melancholy memories...Gone but not forgotten blooms within the garden of love and life...Much enjoyed Bluesy ~ Alana

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07

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10 posted 2017-11-08 08:58 PM

...and I enjoyed your visit, Miss Pinky

...just bein' Bluesy

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