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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2017-10-15 09:48 AM



Recently I have been
told I was awesome
and that I am cool
by two of my peers.
They were rather convincing.
I much preferred what they thought of me
over what I’d been thinking of myself…
So I dared to not, not believe them.
I accepted the realm of possibility
that at age 59 10/12ths,
I may have reached a lifelong desire
I never knew I had,
until now.
Just the other day
When someone asked me
what did I want to be
when I grew up.
I said, after much thought,
a well-known poet.
But now that I know
there is a possibility,
a glimmer of truth
to the words
awesome and cool,
I realize that I’d rather be
what I already am,
what I wanted to be
when I grew up.

LGR©10/14/17



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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2017-10-15 10:49 AM


And you reached for and secured the very best thing to be . . . YOU.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2017-10-15 05:01 PM


You are so kind. Obviously I figured out you don't have to be "perfect" before you can be awesome and cool. ~L
HM3
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3 posted 2017-10-15 06:11 PM


That was awesome.
And cool.

Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching...



Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2017-10-15 08:13 PM


Thank you kindly for the props. ~L
Poet In Pink
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5 posted 2017-10-18 10:33 PM


I gotta say I agree with your peers Lori Lou   I like you the way you are!  Alana
Bluesy Socrateaser
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6 posted 2017-10-19 12:29 PM


quote:
"I realize that I’d rather be
what I already am,
what I wanted to be
when I grew up"
To know this is to understand life.

Very well said, Lori Rhoden. Your wisdom came early in the hour, may it remain deep into the night.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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7 posted 2017-10-19 11:28 AM


Pinkylace,
thank you for the like as I is. ~L

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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8 posted 2017-10-19 12:08 PM


Bluesey,
You sure have a way with a compliment. Nice thing about being awesome and cool is that anybody can be-warts and all. ~L

BluesSerenade
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9 posted 2017-10-19 08:59 PM


I want to be like you when i grow up.

Cool beans Lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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10 posted 2017-10-19 11:18 PM


Blues,
you bless my heart, thank you for the beans!
big hug

LeeJ
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11 posted 2017-10-20 07:19 AM


I realize that I’d rather be
what I already am,
what I wanted to be
when I grew up.

and you have....grown up...understanding the journeys of life....well done Missy!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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12 posted 2017-10-20 01:16 PM


Thanks LeeJ,
I've always maintained that all the hard times you go through have a silver lining in that you then are able to reach out to more people who have gone through the same thing and help them. ~L

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13 posted 2017-10-21 09:57 AM


🌺

I like what you wanted to be when you grew up. Good call!


A

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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14 posted 2017-10-21 11:54 AM


Thanks Alison,
You're a sweetheart.

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