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Bluesy Socrateaser
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0 posted 2017-10-03 01:51 AM


Hmm. A ‘quest’...a journey
through whatever time one may have
to find something, but what?
For me, my ‘gypsy soul’ has been on a
lifelong quest to find you, my darling.

When I tell you that,
do you think of cream cheese?

I love you MORE than you love cream cheese, Linny Mae.
I love your beautiful poetry MORE than you love cream cheese.
You are my Queen...of Everything.
You are the loving girl/woman
I’ve looked for all my days.
More cream cheese? If you like, but I’m quite serious, baby.
You are my love, my pleasure.
There is no feeling of good in me that isn’t a reflection of your love.
God brought you and I [sigh] together, Linny
and thus made it so.
I do nothing without you. It would be impossible.
Your spirit and your love engulf me, in waking hours and sleep.
Yes lover, this I do enjoy. Stay with me forever, Linny Mae.
Stay in love with me forever, as I love you forever.

Here now, finish your cheese, darling.
So rich, thick, and moist. Mmm. XoXoXo.


...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2017-10-03 08:10 AM


Who says true love isn't cheesy? I think that is when it is at its very best. I loved this, it is so sweet!  ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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2 posted 2017-10-03 01:00 PM


...and I loved your reply, which was so sweet!

Many thanks!

...just bein' Bluesy

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2017-10-06 09:19 PM


Smooth and romantic...james
Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 2017-10-10 01:13 PM


...appreciate your thoughts, James.

...just bein' Bluesy

Poet In Pink
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MI
5 posted 2017-10-12 11:33 PM


Pass the cream cheese please   A delightful romantic tale with just the right amount of creamy dreamy sweetness ~ Enjoyed muchers Bluesy ~ Alana
Bluesy Socrateaser
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6 posted 2017-11-17 02:33 AM


Consider it passed, my dear Miss Pinky!

...just bein' Bluesy

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