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Quest Of A Gypsy Soul (Could it be the cheese?)

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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0 posted 10-03-2017 01:51 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Hmm. A ‘quest’...a journey
through whatever time one may have
to find something, but what?
For me, my ‘gypsy soul’ has been on a
lifelong quest to find you, my darling.

When I tell you that,
do you think of cream cheese?

I love you MORE than you love cream cheese, Linny Mae.
I love your beautiful poetry MORE than you love cream cheese.
You are my Queen...of Everything.
You are the loving girl/woman
I’ve looked for all my days.
More cream cheese? If you like, but I’m quite serious, baby.
You are my love, my pleasure.
There is no feeling of good in me that isn’t a reflection of your love.
God brought you and I [sigh] together, Linny
and thus made it so.
I do nothing without you. It would be impossible.
Your spirit and your love engulf me, in waking hours and sleep.
Yes lover, this I do enjoy. Stay with me forever, Linny Mae.
Stay in love with me forever, as I love you forever.

Here now, finish your cheese, darling.
So rich, thick, and moist. Mmm. XoXoXo.


...just bein' Bluesy
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 10-03-2017 08:10 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Who says true love isn't cheesy? I think that is when it is at its very best. I loved this, it is so sweet!  ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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2 posted 10-03-2017 01:00 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

...and I loved your reply, which was so sweet!

Many thanks!

...just bein' Bluesy

JamesMichael
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3 posted 10-06-2017 09:19 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Smooth and romantic...james
Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 10-10-2017 01:13 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

...appreciate your thoughts, James.

...just bein' Bluesy

Poet In Pink
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5 posted 10-12-2017 11:33 PM       View Profile for Poet In Pink   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet In Pink

Pass the cream cheese please   A delightful romantic tale with just the right amount of creamy dreamy sweetness ~ Enjoyed muchers Bluesy ~ Alana
 
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