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Open Poetry #50
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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
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In The Mirror
0 posted 2017-10-01 01:18 AM

Patterns in wood
flow like a still river
Our fingers; moving
with no current at all

Our eyes embracing
like a still river
One love; everlasting
like an endless still river

Patterns traced over skin
slow like a still river
Our fingers; moving
with no current at all



...just bein' Bluesy
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effjayel
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since 2007-09-30
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At the Crossroads of Infinity
1 posted 2017-10-01 08:11 AM

I love this...
No current at all? Not in this case Bluesy, it crackles with emotive energy

"Ignorance is the Enemy...."
Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
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In The Mirror
2 posted 2017-10-01 12:54 PM

Many Thanks, Jack! I trust you and yours are well.

...just bein' Bluesy
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2017-10-01 01:49 PM

Sweet! And warm as melted butter, you nailed this! ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
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In The Mirror
4 posted 2017-10-01 04:05 PM

Aww...! Thanks, Lori Rhoden!

...just bein' Bluesy
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