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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror


0 posted 10-01-2017 01:18 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Patterns in wood
flow like a still river
Our fingers; moving
with no current at all

Our eyes embracing
like a still river
One love; everlasting
like an endless still river

Patterns traced over skin
slow like a still river
Our fingers; moving
with no current at all



...just bein' Bluesy
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effjayel
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1 posted 10-01-2017 08:11 AM       View Profile for effjayel   Email effjayel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for effjayel

I love this...
No current at all? Not in this case Bluesy, it crackles with emotive energy

"Ignorance is the Enemy...."

Bluesy Socrateaser
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2 posted 10-01-2017 12:54 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Many Thanks, Jack! I trust you and yours are well.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Sweet! And warm as melted butter, you nailed this! ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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Aww...! Thanks, Lori Rhoden!

...just bein' Bluesy

 
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