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A Party Tonight

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 10-10-2009
Posts 8216
Fair to middlin'


0 posted 09-30-2017 09:28 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Weíre going to a party tonight
I feel like letting go
I might get smashed
I might get trashed
Who knows
what I might do.
There is going to be a band.
Might dance a little,
might dance a lot.
Might hurt myself
shakiní what I got.
A lot of good people
are gonna be there.
There will be lots of talk
and laughter to be had.
Itís a Biker party,
so I didnít invite my Dad
Theyíre roasting a hog,
itíll be great.
All the olí ladies are
bringing stuff to eat.
It all goes good
with that roasted hog meat.
As I was saying,
Iím not sure just what
my  condition will be
when I get home.
They just might have to carry me.
Itíll take two Iím sure of that.
Because Iím so full of
kindness and love
it makes me look fat.

LGR©9/30/17

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JerryPat2
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since 02-06-2011
Posts 16313
South Louisiana


1 posted 09-30-2017 01:14 PM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

Hope the party you are going to doesn't turn out like another party you went to some time ago.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~
Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 11-07-2002
Posts 841
In The Mirror


2 posted 09-30-2017 01:22 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

quote:
"They just might have to carry me.
Itíll take two Iím sure of that.
Because Iím so full of
kindness and love
it makes me look fat"
Lori Rhoden, you saved the best poetry for last.

Party hardy.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Rara Avis
since 10-10-2009
Posts 8216
Fair to middlin'


3 posted 09-30-2017 03:08 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Thanks for the reminder Jerry I'll be careful not to hurt myself. ~L
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Rara Avis
since 10-10-2009
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Fair to middlin'


4 posted 09-30-2017 03:15 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Hey Bluesy,
What a nice thing to say! That was a shameless tooting of my own horn. (which is probably a tuba) ~L
P.U Stinkenbaum
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No Fan Of Exhaust Fans


5 posted 10-12-2017 02:18 PM       View Profile for P.U Stinkenbaum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for P.U Stinkenbaum

"Tuba or not tuba, THAT is the question!"

It aint the sweet smell of success wafting below your nose...

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 10-26-2003
Posts 1097
Agat, Guam


6 posted 10-12-2017 03:24 PM       View Profile for s1nfully_1nn0c3nt   Email s1nfully_1nn0c3nt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit s1nfully_1nn0c3nt's Home Page   View IP for s1nfully_1nn0c3nt

Thatís the best kind of ďthicknessĒ Enjoyed.

-Trina
...because the most powerful words in your life are "I might be wrong"...

Poet In Pink
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since 05-18-2017
Posts 510
MI


7 posted 10-13-2017 12:00 AM       View Profile for Poet In Pink   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet In Pink

Sounds like the place to be for a good time!!!  Hope you enjoyed it Lori Lou   Alana
 
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