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Bluesy Socrateaser
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0 posted 09-17-2017 10:58 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

My baby rides her red lawn-mow-er
She cruises on it all day long
She’s become my little pass-ing fancy
The inspiration for my song

She loves to wear her short-shorts and her sandals
as she shaves the lawn with ex-per-tise
If I didn’t know my baby so much better
I’d say she looked a-bit-like Gypsy Rose Lee

I try my best to tease her for attention
as she whisks right by me show’rin me with grass
So quickly I ran in and put my clothes on
after sweeping all the de-bris from my _ _ _!


...just bein' Bluesy

[This message has been edited by Bluesy Socrateaser (09-17-2017 11:46 PM).]

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 09-18-2017 06:01 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Oh Bluesey! What will you write next! LOL Thanks for the big laugh to start my day! I think I will be giggling over that image the rest of the day. You crack me up! ~L
JerryPat2
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2 posted 09-18-2017 10:30 AM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

I saw Gypsy Rose Lee many years ago. If you mistook your wife for her, well, you have a wonderful looking wife.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
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3 posted 09-18-2017 12:05 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Thanks a lot, Lori Rhoden, both for the read, and the pun (intended or not) "you 'crack' me up"...

That cracked ME up!  


...just bein' Bluesy
Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 09-18-2017 12:12 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Thanks to you JerryPat for reading and commenting. As for having "a wonderful looking wife", I do...every man does. Even if he's the only one who thinks so.

...just bein' Bluesy

Poet In Pink
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5 posted 10-02-2017 04:09 PM       View Profile for Poet In Pink   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet In Pink

A cute and fun tribute to your wife Bluesy ~ Thanks for the smile   Much enjoyed!  Alana
Bluesy Socrateaser
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6 posted 10-03-2017 02:11 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Thank you, Miss Pinky!

...just bein' Bluesy

JamesMichael
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7 posted 10-06-2017 09:23 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Funny to read...James
Bluesy Socrateaser
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8 posted 10-10-2017 01:14 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

A great compliment, James! Thank you so much!

...just bein' Bluesy

 
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