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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror

0 posted 2017-09-17 10:58 PM


My baby rides her red lawn-mow-er
She cruises on it all day long
She’s become my little pass-ing fancy
The inspiration for my song

She loves to wear her short-shorts and her sandals
as she shaves the lawn with ex-per-tise
If I didn’t know my baby so much better
I’d say she looked a-bit-like Gypsy Rose Lee

I try my best to tease her for attention
as she whisks right by me show’rin me with grass
So quickly I ran in and put my clothes on
after sweeping all the de-bris from my _ _ _!


...just bein' Bluesy

[This message has been edited by Bluesy Socrateaser (09-17-2017 11:46 PM).]

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2017-09-18 06:01 AM


Oh Bluesey! What will you write next! LOL Thanks for the big laugh to start my day! I think I will be giggling over that image the rest of the day. You crack me up! ~L
JerryPat2
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2 posted 2017-09-18 10:30 AM


I saw Gypsy Rose Lee many years ago. If you mistook your wife for her, well, you have a wonderful looking wife.

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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3 posted 2017-09-18 12:05 PM


Thanks a lot, Lori Rhoden, both for the read, and the pun (intended or not) "you 'crack' me up"...

That cracked ME up!  


...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 2017-09-18 12:12 PM


Thanks to you JerryPat for reading and commenting. As for having "a wonderful looking wife", I do...every man does. Even if he's the only one who thinks so.

...just bein' Bluesy

Poet In Pink
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5 posted 2017-10-02 04:09 PM


A cute and fun tribute to your wife Bluesy ~ Thanks for the smile   Much enjoyed!  Alana
Bluesy Socrateaser
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6 posted 2017-10-03 02:11 AM


Thank you, Miss Pinky!

...just bein' Bluesy

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2017-10-06 09:23 PM


Funny to read...James
Bluesy Socrateaser
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8 posted 2017-10-10 01:14 PM


A great compliment, James! Thank you so much!

...just bein' Bluesy

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