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FALLing For You
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FALLing For You |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI 
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The Autumns vibrant beauty Warms the chilly day As we take a wagon ride Bedded down with hay Across the meadow we go Wind whipping our hair Bumping about and laughing We have not a care We reach our favorite spot Under the big oak Settle down to feast on a Sandwich and a coke Sharing a candy~apple Lips so soft and sweet A delicious finale When sticky lips meet Lying among Falls colors Leaves drift from above They mingle with whispered words Sharing in our love © Poet In Pink |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
No colors quite like Wisconsin & Michigan colors, that's for sure. Back a few decades ago Miss Pinky, I took my new bride to "Yooper" country to see the fall colors. We drove around the lake going and took the Ludington ferry back to Wisconsin. Your poetry and image make me feel as though it were today. Just lovely.  ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Pinkyleaf, Your love of color and romance really come together in this one. Makes me wish it was one of my autumn memories. ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
What a beauty of a write, Alana, I could almost smell the sandwich and coke under that "big oak. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
a lovely poem, sweet moments are forever yann |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Alana - You captured a moment of beauty with this one and I'm getting that wonderful pinklish feeling again. Hallelujah!! Namyh |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you Bluesy for sharing that ~ It's always nice to hear when my poetry brings back a good memory to the reader Always appreciate you taking the time to read and comment ~ Pinky |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you Lori Lou ~ You always say the sweetest thangs Pinkyleaf |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you Jerry for reading ~ So glad to hear you enjoyed Alana |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you Yann Appreciate your kind words ~ Alana |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you for the read and kind comment Nam So nice to hear from you ~ Alana |
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