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Poet In Pink
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The Autumns vibrant beauty
Warms the chilly day
As we take a wagon ride
Bedded down with hay

Across the meadow we go
Wind whipping our hair
Bumping about and laughing
We have not a care

We reach our favorite spot
Under the big oak
Settle down to feast on a
Sandwich and a coke

Sharing a candy~apple
Lips so soft and sweet
A delicious finale
When sticky lips meet

Lying among Falls colors
Leaves drift from above
They mingle with whispered words
Sharing in our love

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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No colors quite like Wisconsin & Michigan colors, that's for sure. Back a few decades ago Miss Pinky, I took my new bride to "Yooper" country to see the fall colors. We drove around the lake going and took the Ludington ferry back to Wisconsin. Your poetry and image make me feel as though it were today.

Just lovely.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Pinkyleaf,
Your love of color and romance really come together in this one. Makes me wish it was one of my autumn memories. ~L
JerryPat2
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What a beauty of a write, Alana, I could almost smell the sandwich and coke under that "big oak.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

2islander2
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4 posted 09-20-2017 11:01 AM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

a lovely poem, sweet moments are forever

yann
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Alana - You captured a moment of beauty with this one and I'm getting that wonderful pinklish feeling again. Hallelujah!! Namyh
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Thank you Bluesy for sharing that ~ It's always nice to hear when my poetry brings back a good memory to the reader Always appreciate you taking the time to read and comment ~ Pinky
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Thank you Lori Lou ~ You always say the sweetest thangs   Pinkyleaf
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Thank you Jerry for reading ~ So glad to hear you enjoyed   Alana
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Thank you Yann   Appreciate your kind words ~ Alana
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Thank you for the read and kind comment Nam   So nice to hear from you ~ Alana
 
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