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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2017-09-12 02:06 AM


There’s a box beneath a bridge,
where two lovers hide from lights
It once contained a Whirlpool fridge,
but now it warms their nights

It’s not for lack of money,
they’ve enough to get them by
They wanted to build their dream house,
but the prices reached the sky

So they found a means of living
and to keep their arms and legs
To each other they are giving,
but to society they’re dregs

And love abounds within the ply’s
when Bluesy and Rainbush embrace
Her intoxicating gypsy eyes
Spread Stardust ‘round the place

Yes, there’s a box beneath a bridge,
where two lovers spend their night
When once it contained a Whirlpool fridge,
now it glows with true love’s light

...just bein' Bluesy

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2017-09-12 10:55 AM


I never was one for boxes under bridges, but slept many times in a darkened ally

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
2 posted 2017-09-12 09:16 PM


Yeah, I hear, feel you deep, my man . . . and I've never tried your way, nor Jerry's, but I got so drunk one night (Chinese New Years Celebration) at the NavCommSta, Guam (Naval Communications Station)'s EM Club, that when I started to the barracks about 2 in the morning, a mile or two away through the jungle essentially, I got "off track" and wound up sleeping IN the jungle, unbeknownst to me, until daylight!

Anyway, much enjoyed your piece - well written.

j.

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
3 posted 2017-09-12 10:49 PM


You always relate in your way JerryPat. You're a man of great experience. Thanks for reading and commenting.

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
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In The Mirror
4 posted 2017-09-12 10:52 PM


A grand tale Jimmy! Ha! The moral? Never drink alone and always have a designated paddler.

Thanks for reading & commenting.

...just bein' Bluesy

Poet In Pink
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Posts 1066
MI
5 posted 2017-09-17 08:17 PM


Sounds like a dream home to me...Where there is love....There is everything Much enjoyed Bluesy ~ Alana
Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
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In The Mirror
6 posted 2017-10-28 03:09 AM


Come join us, Miss Pinky! I've just acquired a Hotpoint dual-ply dryer box for an addition!

BYOB...K?

...just bein' Bluesy

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