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The Summer Heat

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror


0 posted 09-07-2017 05:54 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Well baby, we've finished talking for the night,
but I still feel the warmth of you within me,
roaming through the hollows of my heart
that's been so empty for so long without you.

Keep my words among your many thoughts lover
and feel me smiling as I rest inside my shell
while threatening storm clouds move along the horizon,
even as others swing leisurely in their holy hammocks.

We danced to rhythms that were still hidden in time,
as we waited for days that came and went so quickly.
You whispered, telling me of all your favorite places
...I touched them and I felt the Summer heat.



...just bein' Bluesy
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JerryPat2
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South Louisiana


1 posted 09-08-2017 09:14 AM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

Superb wordplay, Bluesy. The first two lines perked my interest, and as I kept reading I realized just what kind of gem this special poem was.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~
Poet In Pink
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MI


2 posted 09-08-2017 02:44 PM       View Profile for Poet In Pink   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet In Pink

Penned to perfection Bluesy ~ Enjoyed your word play and how you expressed your emotions ~ Definitely a Sizzzzler     Much enjoyed ~ Alana
Bluesy Socrateaser
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3 posted 09-09-2017 03:52 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Appreciate your reading and comments very much JerryPat! Thanks!

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 09-09-2017 03:53 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Many thanks to you Pinky! It's appreciated!

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin'


5 posted 09-13-2017 07:55 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

I really love the way you write about love,
you have an earthy, grounded feel to your words that have not been dipped in syrup because they are naturally sweet. ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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6 posted 09-13-2017 09:39 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Such very sweet comments from you, Lori Rhoden. Neither do I feel they are "syrup-dipped", for they move from your heart to your fingertips with no effort at all.

Thank you, dear lady.


BTS


...just bein' Bluesy
 
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