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Terra

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Eversor
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Her hair changes from night to day
Eyes of shooting stars
My heart a tear in space and time
Sorrow a galaxy away

Then from day to night
Spider limbs loosely hang
The drowning ice of Draconis IV
At last, within my sight
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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside


1 posted 09-07-2017 04:46 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

Kind of spacey but very interesting poem.  It literally  went from light to dark.

Welcome to the blue sea.
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!


2 posted 10-21-2017 10:00 AM       View Profile for Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

I enjoyed this. I hope you share more with us.

Alison
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin'


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A different spice to the Big Blue Pot! I like it..  then I say way cool! Welcome to the Blue Buffet!  Be awesome. Stay awesome.
~L
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Awesome Lori speaks and I concur . . . . . .

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

 
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