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Eversor
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0 posted 09-07-2017 08:37 AM       View Profile for Eversor   Email Eversor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eversor

Her hair changes from night to day
Eyes of shooting stars
My heart a tear in space and time
Sorrow a galaxy away

Then from day to night
Spider limbs loosely hang
The drowning ice of Draconis IV
At last, within my sight
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BluesSerenade
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1 posted 09-07-2017 04:46 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

Kind of spacey but very interesting poem.  It literally  went from light to dark.

Welcome to the blue sea.
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2 posted 10-21-2017 10:00 AM       View Profile for Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

I enjoyed this. I hope you share more with us.

Alison
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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A different spice to the Big Blue Pot! I like it..  then I say way cool! Welcome to the Blue Buffet!  Be awesome. Stay awesome.
~L
JerryPat2
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4 posted 10-21-2017 02:59 PM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Email JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

Awesome Lori speaks and I concur . . . . . .

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

LeeJ
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5 posted 10-24-2017 06:52 AM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

Lovely rendition, of a reunion, of light at the end of a tunnel.

LyricFetish
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6 posted 10-25-2017 11:12 AM       View Profile for LyricFetish   Email LyricFetish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LyricFetish

So soulful, I love it.
psychofemale
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I didn't really get the ending of this, are you referencing Game of Thrones? If so how does it relate to the beginning stanza (which was my favorite)? Please help me understand this one a little better! Thank you

*These evil vultures always win*

 
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