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JerryPat2
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I am your last lover
my arms never tire opening and waiting
with patience I never knew I had
I offer you a last resort
no pretense dwells within my heart
I will love your weariness
your trembling lips without their rose
if you are sorrowful
I will coax a smile
I am your comfort without worrisome taglines
I am your last lover

ŠJuly 22, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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You are a special kind of romantic Jerry. ~L
JerryPat2
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And you, Lori, are a special kind of reviewer, thank you.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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JamesMichael
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Enjoyed...james
Bluesy Socrateaser
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Devotion...without measure. The giving of oneself without expectations.

Well done JerryPat.


BTS

...just bein' Bluesy

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A true declaration of love and devotion ~ Doesn't get any better than that Jerry     Much enjoyed the read ~ Alana
JerryPat2
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Thank you James.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

JerryPat2
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Blues, what a very nice response to my poem.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

JerryPat2
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Alana, thank you. Your thoughts and words comfort me.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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