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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !


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         Your Heart

Here in this twilight calm
of gentle moonbeams
dancing on rooftops,
like a shadow that walks
these lonely evening streets,  
I am the ghost moving in
a mirage within a dream,
seeking magic words,
the loveliest ever painted
on the grand-eternal
canvas of the ages or
written with the finest
'voice' of passion in the
immortal book of time
words of the most perfect
rhythm, sound, and meaning
that could somehow catch
and hold your loving 'heart'
    forever

            --- b. e. adams (9/3/2017)

© Copyright 2017 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 11-07-2002
Posts 728
In The Mirror


1 posted 09-03-2017 09:11 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Beautifully sculpted poetry Bruce. Truly. This line, in particular, reached out to me:
quote:
"I am the ghost moving in
a mirage within a dream,
seeking magic words"


Thoroughly enjoyed reading this.


BTS  

...just bein' Bluesy

secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 09-04-2017 08:11 AM       View Profile for secondhanddreampoet   Email secondhanddreampoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secondhanddreampoet

so glad you liked this li'l "poetic scribble!"
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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That was my favorite part too!

Constructive advice: the ' you used in this poem I feel were unnecessary.

Really nice romantic "scribble" ~L
secondhanddreampoet
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Thank you, Lori !
 
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