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An Unobscured View Of Her Resonance

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror


0 posted 09-03-2017 12:44 AM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

A navy blue Maui shore
empties among the rhythmic
sound of sea gulls and waves

A cold Corona
and a rusty binocular
combined
with
a cute girl that passes
reminding me
of the more sensory
pleasures
of life

...just bein' Bluesy

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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !


1 posted 09-03-2017 09:19 AM       View Profile for secondhanddreampoet   Email secondhanddreampoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secondhanddreampoet

VERY well done !
jwesley
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2 posted 09-03-2017 08:33 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Exellent, my friend.  Remember it well when the aircraft carrier I served on spent a month in Hawaii...much of my time was free and spend a ton of it on the beach...

Very well written!

j.
Bluesy Socrateaser
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Thank you Bruce. Good to see you around the place. I appreciate your reply.


BTS

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 09-03-2017 09:30 PM       View Profile for Bluesy Socrateaser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bluesy Socrateaser

Thanks, Jimmy. I was a jarhead just passing through, which over the years, I've done about a half a dozen times...with the same effect.


BTS

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 09-04-2017 03:16 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Excellent snapshot! could have been a beer commercial. Loved it! ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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A beer commercial? Why not? Just get a hold of my agent Lori Rhoden...then get a hold of me!

...just bein' Bluesy

 
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