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Poet In Pink
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0 posted 2017-09-02 01:30 PM






There it still sits our bench of dreams
Nothing has changed or so it seems
Autumn glows in its gleaming hue
The only thing missing is you

Vibrant colors dance in the breeze
A kaleidoscope in the trees
Tangerine orange and flaming red
Falling softly upon my head

I envision us sitting there
So in love and without a care
Snuggled close your hand within mine
Feasting on your kisses divine

Mirrored reflections of the past
A happiness that did not last
There is no rhyme nor no reason
Just an ache that haunts this season

Time moves on beauty remains
As leaves fall free so shall my chains
Time to live and find love anew
Yet my heart will always hold you


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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2017-09-02 11:52 PM


The missing is tangible, the memories of a love lost pulls at my heart strings.

Your poem is so pretty and your title is perfect!!  

Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror
2 posted 2017-09-03 12:17 PM


Seasons change in predictable ways, but who can predict the ways of the human heart? That's where dreams and faith intervene...and they meet to talk it over on your nostalgic "bench of dreams".

There appears to be room for three.

Very engaging poetry Pinky.


BTS

...just bein' Bluesy

secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2017-09-03 09:20 AM


grand-fine pure "Romanticism" and photo-graphic imagery as well !
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
4 posted 2017-09-04 03:23 PM


Pinkyclips,
You have such a wonderful feel about your poetry. Even your melancholy is lightened by your great visuals. You combine wisdom with a hint of innocence that is oh so Pink! ~L

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2017-09-06 12:11 PM


The heart wants love, unfortunately some run from love...James
2islander2
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by the sea
6 posted 2017-09-07 05:00 PM


memories run , and we ask ourselves how to love again, wonderful read "in rose" of course
yann

Poet In Pink
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7 posted 2017-09-08 02:47 PM


Thank you for your visit and kind response Blues Always nice to hear from you ~ Alana
Poet In Pink
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8 posted 2017-09-08 02:49 PM


Hi Bluesy nice to hear from  you     Appreciate you reading ~ Alana
Poet In Pink
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9 posted 2017-09-08 02:50 PM


Thanks muchers Bruce   Appreciate your time!  Alana
Poet In Pink
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10 posted 2017-09-08 02:51 PM


Thanks bunches for your oh so sweet Lori Belle   So appreciate you always reading & commenting!!!  Pinkyclips  
Poet In Pink
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11 posted 2017-09-08 02:52 PM


You are so right James ~ Thank you for reading & commenting on this one   Alana
Poet In Pink
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12 posted 2017-09-08 02:53 PM


Thanks Yann!!  Always nice to hear from you     Alana
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